RuneScape:Featured articles/Warped terrorbird (delist)

Warped terrorbird
The desription of which are weak to an attack assumes there are only 3 types that exist. Whether they've been updated since nomination to have different features I don't know but it's not the easiest thing to understand. Could use pictures tomake the differences clearer

Edmyg 09:31, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Support - literally tl;dr. Does not look good and doesn't attract people to read the actual text. Featured articles should be great for the text it has on it, not just useful for finding the drops of monsters on. We got enough of those articles. this one's just not good enough to be FA. (needs more (good) images too) 02:58, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Support - Looks like any other monster article. 20:25, May 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Strong support - These are just the comments I have of the lead section and info box:
 * Lead: "They require 56 Slayer and a Crystal chime to be killed." Who is they? At least 56 slayer? I think this sentence would be better if it were written like this: "Players need a Crystal chime and [at least] 56 Slayer to kill the monster."
 * The prose needs to be improved so that it is more readable.
 * "There are also three level 143 Warped terrorbirds that the player must fight near the end of The Path of Glouphrie quest; see here for a guide to that fight." "In addition" would be better than "also." The "see here for a guide to that fight" needs to be removed. Also, why must you fight them near the end of the quest? To complete the quest?
 * Expand the lead to add some other important facts about the Warped terrorbirds (the lead seems to suggest the level 81 terrorbirds are more common).
 * Info box: Under experience for killing, explain what the "620" experience is for.
 * There are two consecutive brackets in the infobox. Fix that. Smithing 21:54, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Support - Per Tien. 02:38, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Closed - Warped terrorbirds are no longer a featured article. 00:16, June 12, 2011 (UTC)