RuneScape:Featured articles/Desert Treasure (delist 2)

Desert Treasure
Original Nomination

The article is quite a bit outdated, considering current standarts. it uses a lot of bullet points, and almost feels more like a quick guide, especially in the beginning.
 * Support - as nom 23:11, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Support - I don't think any quest guide using so many bullets (except maybe MEP2, where bullets actually make it easier to understand) should be a featured article. 01:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed to Oppose - After a lengthy rewrite in prose, it actually looks good again; and worthy of being a featured article. 02:31, September 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Support - It is better after the rewrite, but still needs work. E.g. the first and last sections are like "talk to Azzanadra until the conversation is over and congrats" (the same with Asgarnia Smith) - he should at least get his own section and a transcription of the dialogue. 12:59, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Comment - There is no denying it, the rewrite does help, but the wiki does have better quest articles, and it still does have alot of "do this, talk to this npc" in the guide rather than having the backstory into what the npc is saying 18:52, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Weak oppose - It actually doesn't look as bad as you think. トーク 12:06, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oppose - It looks quite good now, a good article, good job Hofmic on the rewrite. 08:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)